Posted October 14, 2006 by Camus66
I wrotte this like 6 years ago when i was in School and i was kinda lonely, but i won a couple of prizes with it, its quiet good, hope u like it guys....
(Original version was in Spanish, so some things may be lost due to transalation)
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It was the month of April, and she wanted to get him an anniversary present, but not just any present, she wanted to give him something he would never forget. So after some days of not having a clue of what to give him, she asked her best friend, who told her to give him a flight ticket to a Caribbean destiny. She loved the idea and immediately went to the flight agency.
When she got to the mall where the flight agency was located, she had already decided that she would buy 2 tickets for Cancun. She thought that the trip wasn't the main attraction but herself; she wanted to have a Honeymoon with him before they where even married. . She already knew that her boyfriend was going to be her husband soon enough so that was the perfect gift. And now that I come to think about it that woman would be the perfect gift for any man, she was 1,74 m, had blue deep and provocative eyes, long blonde hair, perfect nose, and her legs where perfect. But as most pretty women, she was not a humble person and she was very cocky about herself because she felt and looked like a top model.
When she got to the agency she immediately bought the tickets and made the hotel reservations. All the way to her boyfriend's house she felt so happy and could not stop thinking of all the thing they where going to do together in Cancun, and she was very happy. She couldn't wait to tell he's boyfriend about it, 20 minutes later when she finally got to he's apartment her heart was bouncing really hard against her chest.
She took the elevator and knocked on he's door, when he opened the door she threw herself to him and began to kiss him in the neck the mouth, everywhere but after a few seconds she felt some strong arms that where separating her form him, and then she realized that it where he's own arms. When she looked at he's face she didn't see the normal love expression he had with her. She asked what was happening and after some seconds of silence he began to talk. Veronica, I loved you. Loved? She asked. Yeah, yesterday I met this girl that is so good looking. She's a little bit higher than you, she was green eyes, and long black hair, not that over rated blonde hair that u have. And I think that I'm in love with her. What? She screamed, how can you stop loving someone from one moment to another and start loving someone else? That's insane your crazy, bastard. She began to hit him on the chest with her fists closed while she was crying, but after a few second he caught her arms, and she could do nothing.
She felt like all her world was going to end, and she dropped to the ground, after a few minutes she stood up and stormed out of he's apartment. Even thought she had brought her car she was just running trough the city, and when she noticed when was already at her apartment. She had been walking over 2 hours but she wasn't tired, she didn't feel anything but the pain in her heart. She didn't use the elevator, instead she decided to use the stairs, and she climbed the 6 floors in no time. When she got to her apartment the tear almost made for her impossible to open the door because she couldn't put the key in the keyhole. When she finally managed to do it, she entered and saw a pathetic scene that made her pain grow even more, she saw pictures of him all around the apartment, and while she was looking at all of them, she saw that balcony, and her eyes stared at it for a few minutes, and then she decided it. She began to walk towards it, opened the door and leaned to see the streets down there. She could see a lot of people walking down there and she thought they looked so small, like ants, and at the same moment she felt even smaller. Then she put her right leg over the fence, then the right leg, while her grip was tight around it, in that moment the phone began to ring. But she didn't care, she was decided to do it, in that moment the answering machine got the call, and she let loose her right hand, some one began to speak in the phone, it was him, in that moment she let go the other hand, and she began to fall, but she was able to hear what he said in the phone. Hi honey, I hope your all right, I wasn't serious back at my place, happy April Fool day. A Smile appeared in her face, before she continued falling to an inevitable date with the pavement.
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(Original version was in Spanish, so some things may be lost due to transalation)
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:biggrin::biggrin::biggrin::biggrin::biggrin::biggrin:: biggrin::biggrin::biggrin::biggrin::biggrin::biggrin::b iggrin::biggrin::biggrin::biggrin:
It was the month of April, and she wanted to get him an anniversary present, but not just any present, she wanted to give him something he would never forget. So after some days of not having a clue of what to give him, she asked her best friend, who told her to give him a flight ticket to a Caribbean destiny. She loved the idea and immediately went to the flight agency.
When she got to the mall where the flight agency was located, she had already decided that she would buy 2 tickets for Cancun. She thought that the trip wasn't the main attraction but herself; she wanted to have a Honeymoon with him before they where even married. . She already knew that her boyfriend was going to be her husband soon enough so that was the perfect gift. And now that I come to think about it that woman would be the perfect gift for any man, she was 1,74 m, had blue deep and provocative eyes, long blonde hair, perfect nose, and her legs where perfect. But as most pretty women, she was not a humble person and she was very cocky about herself because she felt and looked like a top model.
When she got to the agency she immediately bought the tickets and made the hotel reservations. All the way to her boyfriend's house she felt so happy and could not stop thinking of all the thing they where going to do together in Cancun, and she was very happy. She couldn't wait to tell he's boyfriend about it, 20 minutes later when she finally got to he's apartment her heart was bouncing really hard against her chest.
She took the elevator and knocked on he's door, when he opened the door she threw herself to him and began to kiss him in the neck the mouth, everywhere but after a few seconds she felt some strong arms that where separating her form him, and then she realized that it where he's own arms. When she looked at he's face she didn't see the normal love expression he had with her. She asked what was happening and after some seconds of silence he began to talk. Veronica, I loved you. Loved? She asked. Yeah, yesterday I met this girl that is so good looking. She's a little bit higher than you, she was green eyes, and long black hair, not that over rated blonde hair that u have. And I think that I'm in love with her. What? She screamed, how can you stop loving someone from one moment to another and start loving someone else? That's insane your crazy, bastard. She began to hit him on the chest with her fists closed while she was crying, but after a few second he caught her arms, and she could do nothing.
She felt like all her world was going to end, and she dropped to the ground, after a few minutes she stood up and stormed out of he's apartment. Even thought she had brought her car she was just running trough the city, and when she noticed when was already at her apartment. She had been walking over 2 hours but she wasn't tired, she didn't feel anything but the pain in her heart. She didn't use the elevator, instead she decided to use the stairs, and she climbed the 6 floors in no time. When she got to her apartment the tear almost made for her impossible to open the door because she couldn't put the key in the keyhole. When she finally managed to do it, she entered and saw a pathetic scene that made her pain grow even more, she saw pictures of him all around the apartment, and while she was looking at all of them, she saw that balcony, and her eyes stared at it for a few minutes, and then she decided it. She began to walk towards it, opened the door and leaned to see the streets down there. She could see a lot of people walking down there and she thought they looked so small, like ants, and at the same moment she felt even smaller. Then she put her right leg over the fence, then the right leg, while her grip was tight around it, in that moment the phone began to ring. But she didn't care, she was decided to do it, in that moment the answering machine got the call, and she let loose her right hand, some one began to speak in the phone, it was him, in that moment she let go the other hand, and she began to fall, but she was able to hear what he said in the phone. Hi honey, I hope your all right, I wasn't serious back at my place, happy April Fool day. A Smile appeared in her face, before she continued falling to an inevitable date with the pavement.
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